Story Development – Controlling Idea

As part of the process of developing our story ideas for film we have been introduced to exercises and concepts from the book Story by Robert McKee. One of these concepts is something called the Controlling Idea, which on first hearing made me balk somewhat at the idea of being ‘controlling’ but it has helped me understand the importance of having a strong singular intention at the heart of the film to help inform, support and inspire other threads that arise.


A CONTROLLING IDEA may be expressed in a single
sentence describing how and why life undergoes change from one
condition of existence at the beginning to another at the end.
Story by Robert McKee, pg. 115


It consists of value and cause, identifying the positive or negative outcome or value at the climax of the film and the reason that value changed to that state. So for my film I went through a few iterations before coming to the final idea. These included;


Creative self-expression is achieved because the protagonist accepts her past.


Self-determination is restored because the protagonist uses self-expression to define her own reality.


Vulnerability is accepted because the protagonist creates beauty from the darkness.


While I felt that these expressed something within the story, I didn’t feel like they were communicating the nuance of the original piece, the seeking for balance, not an outright victory in the situation because that is impossible in the wider context. So the final one reads as;


The protagonist brings herself to a state of temporary existential
equilibrium through employing the tools of creative self-expression.

This sentence describes for me the struggle that happens throughout the story and helps me to keep in mind that in the end it’s not about some form of a victory, it’s about the process of self-expression as an ongoing resource.


Main Film Proposal

For the beginning of the BA course we were asked to prepare a presentation to introduce ourselves and our work. We were also asked to present our ideas for our main film project, our solo film, to be produced by the end of the year. For my film I have chosen to adapt a short comic story from the web-comic I created in partnership with my partner, writer/artist Sadhbh Lawlor.

The web-comic is called Splitting Borders and the story is part of a series within it, The Melancholic Wife and her Perpetrating Husband. The story, episode five in the series, was written by Sadhbh and illustrated by myself. I have Sadhbhs permission to adapt it for animation and I will be keeping her informed of the adaptation process to ensure it stays connected to her original intention for the story and our collaboration.

For the presentation I created a motion comic of the original illustrations with a scratch track of the text voiced by myself.

SET Issue 6

SET is an occasionally published zine concerned with the relationship between cinema and its architecture. Focus is aimed primarily on films, which are affected significantly by a singular set or location.

In Issue 6, Fionnuala Parfrey writes about Steve McQueen’s 2008 film Hunger and looks at the poetics and politics of form within the Maze Prison. To accompany this, I was asked to produce an illustration of the film’s key scene.

 

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Rough Design
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Finished Pencil
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Finished Ink
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Alternate Rough Concept
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Alternate Rough Concept

Splitting Borders – Curated Lines

Splitting Borders is a sequential art series created in partnership with artist/writer Sadhbh Lawlor in 2013. It ran initially as a daily web-comic, publishing comic strips online Monday through Friday before switching to a three posts weekly schedule after hitting the 300 comic strip mark.

Curated Lines is a selection of these comic strips that represent the main themes and subject matter that emerged during this run. We DIY published it as a zine for the Dublin Zine Fair 2014 and have sold it through our Etsy store.

Further Splitting Borders work can be found on our site here.

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Autobiographical

Borders a lá Carte

Tell Me a Joke

Pomegranate

Precipice Living

Quiet Moments

Expansion

Surreal Times Call for Surreal Measures

Working at Work